| Review Responses for everything I haven't responded to.... |
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I know its late, but here are finally the review responses for Collide chapter 1. I should be updating something soon.
AtruthLtakesItimeASVS: haha, beijing is in china, right? haha. i figured that i should try and aim for this to have some comedy in it. thanks for the review.
Catpin: sorry that updates haven't been coming as fast as you expected. i've been feeling bad about not updating
smilez4eva: it depends on who you think is black ops...
Traci: thanks for the review
aliaslover14: i should be coming up with a new update sometime in the week because i've had more time
katejones2005: i will answer ALL of your questions in the next few chapters and the rest of the fic for that matter! bear with me here
s: you've got the ships correct
grouchy: i really hope to get the next chapter up by tomorrow maybe
dandan2300: me and cliffys hang out A LOT. i didn't TECHNICALLY say that vaughn was cia, but that doesn't mean he's not cia or something else, or gasp...normal.
Starlight63: more soon, yes
Lil Aussie Alias Chick: i love how you leave me such long reviews....oh, and the timeline of this fic is kinda in second season. but its really tough to say. its just pretty much whenever, but DEFINITELY AFTER sd-6. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Review Responses for Apartment Seven - Chapter 7
Thanks for the reviews!: The one and only the REAL Y..., smilez4eva, luv24+Alias, s, Eza, specialfrog
Timeisonyourside: Of course, EVERYONE can make room for vaughn in their bed. haha.
aliaslover14: sorry i made yall wait so long. drunk weiss is my favorite.
AtruthLtakesItimeASVS: Yani will be just fine. Don't worry, i'm lookin out for her
vaughnloveralwaysandforev: i'm still trying to figure out vaughn's response...but it WILL be good.
dandan2300: i don't care if it takes you a long time to review. its good to know that you review at all.
Lil Aussie Alias Chick: i am GOOD at figuring out what you would do in everyday situations...
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Review responses for That Summer - Chapter 3
Thank you for the reviews!: orely, Chicketepee, give-in-to-love
luv24+Alias: now, if i put vaughn and syd together soon, you wouldn't enjoy reading it, would you?
Catpin: i'm glad you think andrew is nice. in my other stuff, everyone hates the other boyfriend. vaughn changed? maybe...
specialfrog: i wouldn't jsut abandon this fic without warning. don't worry, i love this fic so much to have a sequel, just might take a while to get there...
blond1w/smelborp: its easy for me to write the realistic teenage awkwardness. REALLY easy, being an adolescent teenager, it helps. but my moments aren't that awkward, just sometimes real uncomfortable
Eza: maybe vaughn went along with the lie because he still cares and doesn't want her to screw up? or maybe, by helping her with lying to andrew, he just made it worse for her later?
vaughn is hot: i agree vaughn is out of character, but i wanted to try something different. he should be back in character this next chapter.
kiefer4ever: at least we're lucky andrew isn't a jerk
Okay, I'm expecting to have That Summer and Collide updated by the end of the week, and maybe before Wednesday, but Apartment Seven is getting tougher. But I REFUSE to give up on it. No worries, I'll get out of this writer's block.
Happy New Year guys and I hope you had a great Christmashanakwanzakah.
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| Review Responses for Apartment Seven: Chapter 6 |
[23 Aug 2005|01:23am] |
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Here are the review responses for Apartment Seven: Chapter 6. You guys did WONDERFUL on reviewing *hands over cookies*...
Lil Aussie Alias Chick: SERIOUSLY! Damn woman for your long reviews. Not that I don't like them :-D Of course only YOU would skip to parts in the fic where a certain Aussie girl checks in. Don't act like you don't know what I'm talking about...face off will come, be patient. Quotes, and quotes. ARE YOU QUOTING ME?! Now I know what you mean when you say you love reminicsing stuff. There will be a longer chap next time, as long as you have a shorter review! Haha, jk. Nadia/Yani hate, coming up!
dandan2300: One bed, how all sv shippers always thought it would be...no, I'm not an aussie. That be pretty wicked if I was. Vaughn is WAY MORE than just dreamy....
irionelissa: Who said that Vaughn and Syd would share the bed for the night, eh? I know what you guys all want to see....BUT NO!!! I have plans, and I do NOT want to be predictable. So SV won't be sharing....for now.
smilez4eva: Thanks for the review
ArodLoverus2001: The ending, A CLIFFY! My favorites...
Nicholette: This fic turned out funnier than I thought it would... I can't decided who I personally love more, Michael Vartan or Michael Vaughn. It's too tough. Of course she doesn't think Vaughn looks like Michael Vartan. Lol.
Me number 1 (I've had 2 people review as "Me"): One bed, you know you love it.
eternalgorithm: Yes, omg! Thanks for the review.
aliaslover14: I wouldn't feed you guys absolute crap, now would I?
Kirs-t: Are you an Aussie too? Yani is a REAL LIFE character. I would LOVE to say she's ALL MINE AND THAT I MADE HER UP SO GIVE ME SOME CREDIT, but I can't. She's a real Aussie. Thanks for the review.
Me number 2: Only one bed. You know you love it. The variables, I plan on being original, so the variables are all that matter right now. Why would I give everybody what they want and have them put pillows up or something? That ALWAYS happens. No, I plan on torture. 5:47, yes, that 47 just came out of nowhere *cough*.
VaughnIsMine: Never Been Kissed...I LOVE THAT MOVIE TO DEATH!!!! Thanks for the review.
superduck123: Nadia and Cesar...mhmmmm, I dunno. They may break up, they may not. I'm trying to bring a few people into this fic...
Eza: Thanks for the review
Mizzle fo' Rizzle: That's right WOMAN! You have NO excuse for not reviewing sooner! I hate writing comedy...its tough Michelle! But as long as you laugh when you read it, its all good. Nadia and Weiss, its happening, eh? Yeah, we'll see about that... Spartan! HEY! The Spartans are the mascot of my new high school... If Michael Vartan had a twin, he'd be mine too (okay, I know you'll kill me later for that)... Cliffhangers Sufferers Anonymous, HEY NOW! I'm like president of that after CC!!! But then again, me and cliffies are like peanut-butter and jelly...
kiefer4ever: one bed. Yep, one bed. Interesting indeed.
Lil Aussie Alias Chick: HEY! SHE CHEATED! SHE CAN'T HAVE TWO REVIEWS!!!! Can she? You ARE insane....
I'm writing the next chapter as we speak...
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| Review Responses for That Summer: Chapter 2 |
[23 Aug 2005|01:12am] |
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Here are the review responses for That Summer: Chapter 2...silly me, I thought there would be more reviews for this chapter...(HINT!)
Mizzle fo' Rizzle: Jack and emotion. I know, hard to believe. DUH Vaughn has feelings for her. Have they gone out once? I dunno :-D IT'S YOUR MORNING HAZINESS SPEAKING! Me? Damn pitchfork ho? Noooooo! Don't hold chappies hostage!
Lil Aussie Alias Chick: I DID get more reviews because I took your advice on the anonymous review thinger. Thanks. But silly, I only got 5 reviews for this chapter... maybe I should make Syd's pretty-boy bf a little like Victor...that'd be easy to write...lol. As long as he's nothing like Mike. Well maybe that's what I'm aiming for him to be...I dunno. THE SV TENSION IS THE BEST NO DOUBT! I kinda felt bad about Irina admitting to Jack that Nads wasn't his...but oh well, I'm over it. :-D
dandan2300: The A/N...hehe, its good they make you laugh. Syd HAS to have a b/f. It's only right. Where else am I supposed to get SV tension? You know you love it...
AtruthLtakesItimeASVS: Alright, alright. I'll explain what happened between Syd and Vaughn....in the next chapter. I have to keep a little bit of mystery in there, but its kinda obvious that SOMETHING happened between the two...
fieldranked: Thanks for the review! And thanks for readinG!
tisk tisk tisk.....
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| Review Responses for Close Encounters: Chapter 16 FINISHED |
[23 Aug 2005|12:57am] |
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Here are the review responses for Close Encounters: Chapter 16. I thought that there would be more, this being the VERY LAST chapter and all...so I guess there may not be a sequel, I'm not sure if anyone wants one, because of the lack of reviews...
Mizzle fo' Rizzle: Awww, MY FAITHFUL READER WOMAN!!! Nah, why would I care if you picked up only half way through this fic? You read it all anyway, eh? I hated doing it in first person. I have to go back and rewrite it to make everything past tense... PITCHFORKS!!! Go Clapton...
AtruthLtakesItimeASVS: This cute fic was my first ever fic. I'm gonna miss it...
ArodLoverus2001: Syd and Vaughn, together they must be! Sequel...read note above...
irionelissa: I've never really thought of Vaughn as a singing kind of guy...but I thought it was a different way how to end the fic.
Lil Aussie Alias Chick: You and your Tolstoy long reviews... I think I've fallen asleep in detention...okay, well maybe not, because that would actually require BEING in detention, which I have not. I mentioned Anthony Callea JUST for you. I'm so great, I know. I haven't seen There's Something About Mary... I think I did alright for finishing the fic, I've never finished one, so I guess its kinda cool...
Catpin: read note up above about sequel... Thank you so much for reading this fic. And I HAVE been updating my other fics...
Aliaschickita47: I'm glad you put in that censoring... sequel...mhmmmmm, I dunno...
moshizzle de fizzle: Thanks for the review
aliaslover14: Thanks for the review.
kiefer4ever: Go Eric Clapton. I'm amazed at how I ended this, I've NEVER ended a fic before, this was my first time. But then again, this was my first fic...
PEOPLE! READ WHAT I SAID UP ABOVE ABOUT SEQUEL! I need reviews to live!! Why do you think I like to write? I write for the love. Now PEOPLE! IS THERE LOVE?!!!
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Okay, I'm thinking about updating within the next few days before I go to soccer camp. I'm gonna update That Summer. I was originally going to update it earlier this week, but I haven't had that much time to write and I was disappointed with the amount of reviews that I received for Close Encounters. But not to worry, you'll have a new chapter by Sunday. And I'll start to write the 3rd chapter for That Summer and the 6th chapter for Apartment Seven.
~aryn
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| Blueprint: The Bristow Estate in That Summer |
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Here's the blueprint for the Bristow Estate in That Summer. It took me awhile to draw. I wanted it to be different!
Just click on the link below...
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y218/soccerfreeek324/DSC00321.jpg
Tell me what you think of it! I really like to provide visuals. I think I might want to be an architect.
I think the next fic I'll update is Close Encounters. It's been awhile, and this will be the last chapter for the fic. It's been fun.
~aryn
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| Review Responses for Apartment Seven: Chapter 5 |
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The Responses:
VaughnIsMine: I'm assuming your two favorite shows are Alias and The OC? This wasn't really meant to be a comedy. I SUCK at comedy. Lol. Well, I'm glad that you're liking it.
smilez4eva: Thanks for the review! It's great to know that people appreciate this story, as it was fun to write.
Thanks for the reviews!!! I love all the support. I would probably never update if you guys didn't push me, so thanks.
Next on fanfiction.net, I think I'll update Close Encounters.
Here next on my blog is blueprint of the Bristow Estate in That Summer.
~aryn
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| Review Responses for Apartment Seven: Chapter 5 |
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Here are the review responses for Apartment Seven: Chapter 5!
dandan2300: I love it when people hear conversations that they're not supposed to hear. Well, when it doesn't end up bad for me...
Mizzle fo' Rizzle: I think maybe Yani and Weiss should have a comedy face-off. I think that Yani is starting to become my favorite character too...it used to be just Syd or Mike. Just friends, thats like uh...one of those things. I can't think of the name right now. Making people's days is what I'm here for. Anytime. :-)
gonnabfamous07: you love it? you love it? you love it? thank you! thank you! thank you! for the review!!!
tookie30318: funny is what I aim for. Updates come as long as everyone reviews!
Catpin: Yani should be right most of the time... She's hilarious, I agree. I'm glad you love her. She's not really my original character. She's actually a real person. I just like to think that she IS MY original character...
irionelissa: What Vaughn says will be guarenteed to be awkward, and funny. Do I write good comedy? Because I find it hard to write...
ArodLoverus2001: Santa Barbara... will come! I promise. I'm still trying to figure out what they're gonna do there. Maybe they'll be there in 2 or 3 chapters. I dunno. Maybe next chapter!
vaughnloveralwaysandforev: The emphasis on "just friends"... hence the chapter title. I think that it may be safe to say that the conversation between Syd, Yani, and Fran was the highlight of the chapter... it was fun to write, but real hard. I have a tough time with comedy. As long as everyone else thinks it turned out well...
TVCrazed: Thanks for the review.
kiefer4ever: I don't know how soon they'll get to Santa Barbara...
vaughnlover101: Santa Barbara may come within the next two chapters. I'm hoping. Something great will happen there. But I'm not so sure about fluffy. There might be SOME fluff, but I it will be a bit angsty to get to the fluffiness!
Lil Aussie Alias Chick: Everyone loves you! I was kinda second guessing if I was portraying you as YOU or something you weren't. But apparently I guessed right. I'm glad I cleared up the Aussie lingo thing. That was kinda messy in the chapter before that. The instant relationship for Syd/Fran/Yani is a given. They are like 'big sisters' to Yani. S/V getting their act together? For now...
heaven's acid: Yani is probably my favorite character right now. I think that this needs some comic relief since it seems that Weiss is being a bit more serious for now. Santa Barbara...
Santa Barbara... the place that Syd and Mike never seem to get to... :-)
I think that I'll update the VERY last chappie of Close Encounters next. I'm planning on a sequel. Oh, and I plan on posting a house design of the Bristow house in That Summer. I dunno when I'll be done drawing that though... I know what it looks like. I'm almost done drawing it...
~aryn
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| Review Response: That Summer - Chapter 1 |
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Here's another review response for That Summer, chapter 1.
AtruthLtakesItimeASVS: I guess I wanted to get the idea across that stardom probably isn't all that great, and that it can be emotional too. Vaughn and Syd together...maybe. Hehe. I'm an S/V shipper, so NEVER question that. I hope that was enough of a relief for you. YES! Fran WILL be in this. She's usually in all of my fanfics. I like the bond that she and Sydney have. I'm trying to incorporate as much Alias characters as I can. Thanks for the review!!
I'm gonna try to update SOMETHING after I finish cleaning my room. I made an Alias movie last night...two people said that I did a good job. I liked it. I'll try to update, I promise. I just have to finish the dump I call my room...
~aryn
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| Review Responses for That Summer - Chapter 1 |
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Hey Everyone! I just got back home. So now I have time to do review responses. I was really excited that you guys enjoyed this fanfic. I was kinda nervous about it, because I wanted to do a really good job on the whole, "Sydney-is-an-actress-who-hates-Vaughn-to-death-which-works-perfectly-because-he-hates-her-as-well" thing. BUT!! Both Syd and Mike have a secret (well, I'll make you people think its a secret). Hint hint. That was a spoiler. Hehe.
kiefer4ever: I know that a lot of you may not like the whole s/v enemy thing, but angst is what we need here! There WILL be fluff. I promise you! Eventually...
TimeIsOnYourSide: I really like this fic. I was paranoid about what you would say. I didn't want people to be all like, "Oh great. Syd's a celebrity. This will be crap." I'll try and update my other fics. I've been gone for a month, and I really wanted to get this one out before I left for that month.
ssandy: I like the way you think woman! Different was what I was aiming for. It's not your typical Alias fanfic, I assure you. Thanks for the review.
Mizzle fo' Rizzle: S/V ANGST IS THE BEST! Admit it woman! YOu love it, you know you do. There will be more angst. And maybe some fluffy stuff. LATER. But not now. Now I'm having fun playing with you. HAHA!!
vaughn is hot: I'm deadly afraid of going into high school this year. I can't even imagine being a senior yet. But I'm told its an awesome year...I want Sydney to feel like she's missed a great experience, but that there's still hope for her and her friends.
Vaughn+Sydney: I don't know if I really intended on making Syd a snot or not, I was just kinda writing as if it were me. I was actually thinking about that in the shower. Did I intend for her to be a snot? Maybe. To Vaughn at least. I wanted to make a really good "Hollywood fic" because the ones that I read were kinda cliche, so I wanted something different, something interesting. And I hope that's what you thought it was!
Catpin: I was DREADING the opening of this fanfic. I was scared no one would like it. My updates have been coming slow because I've been SOOOOOOOOOO busy. But its summer now, and I should have LOTS of time for fanfiction. Anything for my readers/reviewers!
ArodLoverus2001: Hmmmhm...lets see...will this be an s/v fic...
portkey00: I'm excited for this series. Jack is that mean because he didn't want Sydney to act. But Irina was just trying to pacify him so that he wouldn't be too harsh on Sydney. So the two took Nadia when Syd was supposed to come home. But the Syd and Mike relationship should turn out interesting... I promise, it will be angsty.
Lil Aussie Alias Chick: Her family hasn't forgotten her. It's just supposed to look that way because it would make more of an emotional impact. In reality, they are just upset with her. Nadia and Syd ARE the same age. The princess thing...heh, well I had to throw something in that would make Syd pissed if Vaughn said it. Heh.
vaughnloveralwaysandforev: Remember this: "We like different. Different is good." I'm glad you had this kind of reaction. It's tough to find something good to write about. Well for me it is. DIFFERENT IS HOW I BE!
dandan2300: The parents, they haven't forgotten Syd. Jack is pissed because he didn't want her to act, and Irina wants to pacify him to lessen the blow Sydney, so they just took Nadia out, at Jack's request. You'll see in the next chapter. Vaughn is supposed to be real annoying, and a total shit bag towards Sydney. And she of course has to return his snide comments. This is fun!
I'm glad that you all thought that this was different. It was fun to write! OKAY! ANNOUNCEMENT!!! Go check out Cruelly Committed by Mizzle fo' Rizzle (TRULY AWESOME GNOME!!!), her fic is soooooooo riotous! Go read it people! I promise that you guys will like it! PROMISE!! Hehe.
I'll try and update my stuff ASAP!!
~aryn
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Hey Everyone! You know how I said that I MIGHT change the name for my new fanfic, Home for the Summer? Well I do want to change it. It will be called, That Summer. Lol. Just clearing that up for everyone! I'm going to update something soon!
~aryn
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| Review Responses: Apartment Seven - Chapter 4 |
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Here are the review responses for Apartment Seven - Chapter 4!!!
Mizzle fo' Rizzle: The proposal dream...hehehehe. I just HAD to add that. I had you going when I told you that part. It was hilarious, and I'm going, "HA! SHE DOESN'T KNOW! MUWAH! My work here is done." You don't recognize the 'staying with her because her father died' thing from s2? COME ON! You probably do...Lol. I'm glad you like my cliffhanger. Lol. A million dollars...mhmmm... nah. I think I'll pass. MSN messenger WAS just made for nudging!
sydofthesea: Santa Barbara...mhmmm. Do I have BIG plans for Santa Barbara. We'll just have to wait and see if she says yes. I wasn't planning on it being an easy task to get them together, and this IS an angst fic...
vaughn is hot: the only show I watch religously anymore is Alias, but sometimes I watch The O.C. when I can. Nothing is better than when Sydney is pissed.
kiefer4ever: A proposal, yes. I was trying to trick you guys. A dream. It was all a dream. I thought I would throw you guys off again by calling the chapter Santa Barbara. Lol. S/V moments shall be in the future. Lol
TimeIsOnYourSide: We all want Syd and Vaughn to get married. I know that, but I wouldn't get S/V together too soon. I like watching everyone squirm at angst. It's fun. Lol. Vaughn is perfect in my book too! I love him! Lol...as if that weren't already obvious...lol.
BrSoccerChic: Yeah, I guess Vaughn DID deserve Syd's snappiness. Lol. Serves him right...psh! Lol.
nelly2301: I'm sorry about the whole Aussie slang thing. I got carried away, I must agree. I totally stereotyped Aussies. But I'm not going to have that much of Aussie "slang". Its too tough to write, and well, like I said, I think I totally stereotyped Aussies. So sorry about that.
Anna Banana Boat: You just STARTED reading this?! WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN!?! Lol, jk. Well technically I don't want to say that Vaughn was cheating on Alice...Lol. Angst is the theme here!
SoApQueEn: An update should be up within the next 2 weeks, I'm hoping. Thanks for the review!
Lil Aussie Alias Chick: But dreams are good! Come on! I had to keep you guys interested! What better way than a proposal? *coughdreamproposalcough* lol. In this fic, Vaughn is ALL ABOUT weird committment issues. Lol.
ArodLoverus2001: Or did he REALLY break up with Alice? Did he? Did he really? Ask yourself that...Lol. I've never been to Santa Barbara, but I want to go soooooooooooo bad. Like none other. You cannot believe how much. Lol. I LOVE S/V!
TheUptownGirl: I love the Australian girl too! She's one of my friends...Lol. She is the BOMB! Lol. The subject of Santa Barbara will bring angst to our s/v plot here. Lol, I hope you enjoy the bumpy ride!
Hey everyone! I'm writing the pilot chapter of this new fic, called Home for the Summer. The name MIGHT change. But I don't think so. I'm also working on new chapters for Apartment Seven and Close Encounters. The Close Encounters chapter will be the last one I write for that fic, for a while. I'll update it occasionally. I've been bogged down in all this crap, so I haven't had ANY time to work on my beloved Alias fanfiction! I promise to get up to speed!
~aryn
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| Review Responses: Apartment Seven - Chapter 3 cont. |
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Hey Everyone! Here's more review responses for Apartment Seven - Chapter 3. I MIGHT update tonight. I'm actually going to start writing the next chapter after I'm done here.
vaughn is hot: AH-MAZING cliffhangers are sort of my thing. Learn to love them. They'll be around for a while. Yay! I'm flattered that you'd add me to your favorite author's list. So cool. I know. The apartment, I drew the plan myself. I think I may want to be an architect when I grow up, which means I have to do real well in math. Bah! But I want to be an actress too. Thanks for the review!
Aliasa: I'm glad you love it! I'm continuing tongiht...hopefully...Thanks for the review!
justadrawer: I know I'm good. When I'm good, I'm great. When I'm bad, I'm better. Lol. Sweetie, the point of a cliffhanger IS to keep you hanging. HANG in there. Lol, that has got to be THE worst joke...
Hey everyone! Learn to love the angst! It's going to be a common theme in my chapters!
I'm planning on writing most of chapter 4 for Apartment Seven tonight. Maybe even posting! GASP!
~aryn
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| Review Responses: Close Encounters - Chapter 15 |
[08 May 2005|08:22pm] |
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Hey Everyone! Here are the review responses for Close Encounters - Chapter 15. Sorry I've taken so long to post!
Lil Aussie Alias Chick: A Northface is a jacket silly! I own 2 of them...of course I HAD to include a bit where Vaughn kicked Kevin's ass. Everyone's been on MY ass about it for weeks now. I use my soccer skills every day, in the most odd and reasonable ways. Lol. Did I say that Vaughn was the one who got the letters to Syd? Remember, they were just there. Apartment Seven...well, I'm gonna start the new chapter tonight...I know I've been bad on updating that one, it's just I've gotten this great new idea for another fanfic, and I've been real excited about that one. I'm gonna start writing the new chapter for Apartment Seven after doing review responses.
gonnabfamous07: Sweetie, evil is my middle name. Well it really isn't, actually, but whatever. Yay, you love my story.
TimeIsOnYourSide: She isn't ready...yet. But how else am I supposed to keep you people interested in this story without proper angst? The note passing and the Northface games...he he he. So fun to write. I'm not dissing the jackets. I own 2 of them! And a Northface hat. It's just a game that my best friend and her cousin made up that we play. Nobody plays with me anymore because I punch real hard. I'm gonna start writing the next chapter for Apartment Seven after this, I PROMISE!
noggi: Yes, come on! I'm writing a response whether you like it or not. Yes, Vaughn obviously loves Sydney, but she's hurting from Kevin. I'd think you'd be happy with his and her's revenge on Kevin. Sydney just can't rush into another relationship. But don't worry, the next chapter will be as fluffy as I can make it without going too far.
kiefer4ever: I'm not putting them off. I'm just simply making it so you people stay interested in this fic. :-)! And you ALL love me for it.
orlandohter: Murals on the wall? Where are you getting this from?! My family SO does NOT have a famiyl support system. And I don't really wish we had one either. YUS! I get saved from being middle-named! More please? In the words of Ally, "I like to see you beg." HA!
MVP Girls: I'm surprised I didn't get a better reaction out of my reviewers for Vaughn's revenge. Especially since you were all begging for me to have Vaughn beat Kevin up, but nooooo. I am truly disappointed! JK! But not really.
largemarge416: I don't get kicks from Syd and Vaughn not being together. I just get kicks from everyone's reactions to my writing. New chapter will be coming up sooner or later. I have stupid projects going on right now. And I think the next chapter will wrap up the story for a while. I might write a sequel, I might not.
Mizzle fo' Rizzle: Sydney might have to read JUST a few more of the letters to get the hint about her and Vaughn just HAVING to be together. And the 'punching game', is called Northface. I, in fact, am pretty damn good at that game, I must say. It's all VERY fun.
ArodLoverus2001: Knocking sense into Sydney will come next chapter. I PROMISE!
So I think that the next chapter will wrap up this fic for the time being. And I will eventually start adding chapters randomly this year. It's just that I have a lot of other fanfics that I want to get started and posted before I start Summer break, and school is really stressing me out. But I will definitely add more to this. It might be in a sequel, it might not. But I promise I will add to it along the road.
The next chapter, I'm hoping, will be a long one. I want it to be long for the big (for now) finale of this fic.
I hope you guys don't hate me for it.
~aryn
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| Review Responses: Apartment Seven - Chapter 3 |
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Review responses for Apartment Seven: Chapter 3
Lil Aussie Alias Chick: You've seriously read this chapter over and over? Me too. Well only because I wanted it to have good flow. Bad for running through to your entrance! Bad Y! I knew you were going to do it anyways...Lol. Angst is one of the many things I do best. You might be in the next chapter more, but there's gonna be a lot going on. I wrote that last chapter in like an hour. I'm ashamed of myself for not spending enough time on it though.
Mizzle fo' Rizzle: You read fanfiction before school? Man, I'd have to wake up super duper early to do that. Now Alice...hmmm...that girl. She's a different story. I have no idea how I'll get her out of the picture, but I can't tell you whether Syd and Vaughn will get together after that...mu WahUAG!
TimeIsOnYourSide: Syd SHOULD slap Vaughn for going with Alice. I loved the Getaway. That was such a cute episode. Of course it's our duty as S/V shippers to cheer on their dates...even IF they are technically in different relationships. Now we must ask ourselves, is Vaughn REALLY with Alice *shivers*? Ha! Think about it...
noggi: Vaughn dating two women at the same time. BAD VAUGHN! Syd (and you) will be getting an explanation soon. Hopefully...
BrSoccerChic: Vaughn, a player? NO WAY!!! *cough cough* I mean uh...Think about it, would you turn your cheek if Vaughn tried to kiss you? Yet Syd did...
katejones2005: It's not gonna end that fast silly! I have soooooooooo many ideas for this like you would never believe! When I was younger, I always idolized the people living in the ice cream shop. They had cool t-shirts. But I LOVE sprinkles, you sunshine-killer! JK! I personally liked the strawberry ice cream joke as well. I needed something funny to put in here. Lol. I don't really think that strawberry is a real flavor either...According to the tests in my computer class at school, I'm a 13 year- excuse me, 14 year old who can type 60 words a minute. Cool, I know. That's because I AM cool. And that's typing accurately too. I'm skilled, what can I say?
livingArtemis: I think everyone hates Alice. Bah. She's so stupid. Remember what I said, Vaughn has commitment issues.
ArodLoverus2001: Alice will be gone soon. I promise.
sydofthesea: I wouldn't exactly call him a player...even though he is. Lol. Playful banter is always good. They are going to have a flirtacious relationship. I assure you that. It's also going to be an angsty relationship.
TheUptownGirl: I love your fic! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON! I am forever in love with your writing. I love reading and writing. I love reading other author's work here. You my friend, have potential. Yes, Vaughn is leading Syd on, and I know that's bad, but its so cute when they flirt with each other.
vaughnloveralwaysandforev: Michael and Syd will forever be cute together. Lol. Even if he is seeing someone else.
MVP Girls: Alice, Alice, Alice. She will be out of the picture soon, but I'm not sure that Vaughn and Syd will get together as soon as everyone will want them to.
kiefer4ever: Don't worry. Vaughn will dump Alice soon enough.
vaughnlover101: Thanks for the review and PLEASE keep reading! I love getting feedback.
portkey00: Cliff hangers are my thing. The date seemed a bit awkward to me. Probably because I wrote the chapter in like an hour. Bad me, I know. Alice isn't gonna find out because her butt will be outta there in no time!
Thanks for all the reviews! I REALLY enjoy your feedback!
I shall update tomorrow night!
~aryn
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| Review Responses: Close Encounters - Chapter 14 |
[02 May 2005|10:07pm] |
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These are the review responses for Close Encounters - Chapter 14. Mua wah!
If only I had a dollar everytime someone said that Vaughn was a gentleman...
Lil Aussie Alias Chick: Weren't you reading girl! That's how they got into her room. He just opened the door silly. I had to think of some way that Vaughn could get her changed appropiately. Lol. It was tough, but he got through! Lol
TimeIsOnYourSide: It's tough writing with little dialogue. I almost beat my brains out. Vaughn is such a gentleman, yeah, yeah, yeah, that's what they all say...seriously. I totally could imagine him as a knight in shining armor. He was in Avalon, though I haven't seen it, I want to. I just watched One Hour Photo last night with Michael and Robin Williams, and that has to be the weirdest movie I have ever ever seen. Please update! I need my S/V fix! Please! I'm dying here!
noggi: I think this next chapter will be the chapter that you're waiting for, but uh, it won't say in the title. But you'll like it, then you'll hate me. You'll have to read it to get what I mean. The letters. Muwah! You shall find out my dear. Who put them there *cough* I do not know *cough*.
katejones2005: You love them all? All meaning the only two I've ever written? Yay. There will be more letters, I promise. I will put the letters in randomly as the chapters go on. Big ball of doom...hmmmm...I will try to find a way to somehow incorporate that into the story. It shall be funny. That's certainly going to be interesting...
Mizzle fo' Rizzle: According to earlier chapters, Vaughn wrote about...28 letters? I dunno. I wrote, it but still, I dunno. Lol. Vaughn could have all the bonus points in the world as long as I could still look at him. Totally, Jack, does uh, have a good heart *coughcough*. Oh, are you alright? Uh yeah, I'm just uh, getting over bronchitis
blond1w/smelborp: Writing young people is what I'm good at because I am young. That's all I know how to write at the moment!
ArodLoverus2001: There will be more letters on the way too! Thanks for the review!
sydofthesea: OMG! Seriously, a dollar for every person who has said he's a gentleman...I'm actually relieved that you liked the interaction with him and her parents. But there will be some kind of twist there. I assure you.
portkey00: "The Bristow Family's Circle of Trust". He he he. Jack and Irina....hmmmm...You must read on to discover what lays ahead for those two. WuWAH! Syd and Vaughn together...well, for the time being...MuWaH!
Unsigned: Syd got the letters from *************. Jack and Irina, well I haven't decided if I wanted them to read them or not. Vaughn's revenge is coming up! I PROMISE!
MVP Girls: You gotta love the "Bristow Family Circle of Trust". It's like a law that you have to. Well when Syd finds out that her mom didn't tuck her into bed...can you say chaos? Jk. Or am I?
kiefer4ever: more letters I promise. But they will be scattered through-out the chapters. I think you'll like the way they'll be set up.
THOSE ARE THE REVIEWS! I'm planning on updating tomorrow night. Or very earl in the morning, Wednesday.
~aryn
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| Review Responses: Apartment Seven - Chapter 2 |
[24 Apr 2005|09:52pm] |
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Hey Everyone! These are my review responses for Apartment Seven - chapter 2.
Congratulations to Lil Aussie Alias Chick. She will an original character in this fic!
Note: Thanks to Mizzle fo' Rizzle, everyone can now see what Sydney's apartment looks like! Well in blueprint form, at least. If you scroll down to somewhere in my blog, the link for the site where it is, should be down their somewhere.
Mizzle fo' Rizzle: YES! Commitment issues. People are going to be getting antsy with Vaughn's behavior, but it will be fun. Vaughn and shorts, my fantasy. Yours too, I take it? Lol. Poor Nadia, I know. She's with Cesar...for the time being. I got my uncle hooked on Alias, and he said that Cesar is pretty good looking, but he likes Weiss 'cause he's funny. Lol. Thanks for the review and putting my blueprint in your photobucket!
jade-bristow202: I have a question for you. Do you think that my cliffy this time sounds a bit angsty? S/V flirting is hard to write when one of them is in a relationship, but its also easy at the same time. If that made any sense all at. Thanks for the review!
Lil Aussie Alias Chick: The fuse idea...hmmmm. I'm honestly trying to figure out a part to put that in. Lol. Vaughn and sweat...enough said.
sydofthesea: Hey! I haven't heard from you in a while. For a while there, I thought you fell and couldn't get up. I guess I have to call of that search party...Yes, of course he asked her to dinner, silly! It's going to be great, I assure you!
Allegra Moon: Yup. Vaughn is a commitment-phobe. I mean, didn't he already flirt and stuff with Syd in s1 and 2 when he was with Alice? That's kinda where I got the idea. Syd needs Vaughn with his strong arms to help her with boxes...not that she's not capable or anything. Lol.
ArodLoverus2001: We all know Syd's answer! Come on! Who said she'll steal Vaughn from Alice, though?
dani11e87: Thanks for reviewing! This IS SOOO cool!
TimeIsOnYourSide: I hate it when the server is down. I just hate it. I couldn't review, or even edit mistakes at all! It was disappointing. But I'm glad to see that you still updated, even with the server being down. But what if he STILL is dating Alice? DUN DUN DUUUUN! I'm kinda happy (no offense) that I posted this before you. Lol. I have SOOOOOOOO many ideas for this fic! Yeah, I know its my turn to update. You even updated today. I've been caught up in all this school work, so I haven't even had time to even begin a chapter. But I'm hoping to update tomorrow or Tuesday night.
largemarge416: It wasn't your computer being evil, the system was down. I'm becoming one of your favorite authors? Oh my! That's so cool! When I posted the very first chapter for my very first fanfic, I didn't think that I would be getting as good as a reaction from everyone as I am today. It's so cool! So thank you for reading AND reviewing. It really does mean a lot to me.
justadrawer: I like how you say wicked. That's wicked. Lol. I'm really happy and GLAD that you loved this chapter!
TheUptownGirl: HE CAN TOO BE ASKING HER OUT ON A DATE! HE'S VAUGHN! HELLO!! This is too easy, but believe me, this will get REALLY complicated. Inviting her over to meet Alice would be so mean! Lol. Don't you worry, they WILL be together in the end. But the end my friend, is a looooooooooooooong way down the road.
Masta D: Yay! You love this story? Really? Truly?! Yay! *does a victory dance, WEISS STYLE!* I know, I just started it, but I have SOOOOOOOOO many ideas!
lec: Yes. Another encounter. But I assure you there will be more!
Ren201: I never said anything about Vaughn 2 timing Syd! But there will be a lot of drama, and I think everyone will hate me for it.
Note: Thanks to Mizzle fo' Rizzle, everyone can now see what Sydney's apartment looks like! Well in blueprint form, at least. If you scroll down to somewhere in my blog, the link for the site where it is, should be down their somewhere.
I LOVE YOU GUYS FOR REVIEWING! I know I don't say it enough, but I am now! You have NOOOO idea how much your reviews mean to me. They can make me feel better when I'm sad! Lol. THANK YOU EVERYONE!
~aryn
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| Review Responses: Close Encounters - Chapter 13 |
[24 Apr 2005|09:22pm] |
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Congratulations to Lil Aussie Alias Chick for guessing what Vaughn meant in chapter 13! She won a chapter dedication (don't know what one yet) and will become an original character in my other Alias fanfic, Apartment Seven. Congratulations!
These are my review responses for Close Encounters - Chapter 13.
Mizzle fo' Rizzle: Yes, I am a cornball. You swooned over this chapter? Well if you did, that's AWESOME! I never thought that my writing could have that kind of affect on a reader. Thank you so much for putting the blueprint on your photobucket! That means so much to me! Thank you sooooo much for reviewing as well as reading!
Lil Aussie Alias Chick: Yes! You win! Of course you already knew that because we've been e-mailing all weekend...Lol.
vaughn is hot: Yes, it is incredibly sweet what Vaughn meant. I'm glad that you think that this chapter seemed so realistic to normal teenage life. Because I am a teenager, it's easier for me to relate, so therefore it would be easier for me to write. Lol. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Allegra Moon: I like Weiss' eggplant suit! Unfortunately, your answer to the challenge is incorrect. But thanks for trying! I'm glad that people participated in my little challenge. But Syd WILL always be important to Vaughn. Thanks for reviewing!
ArodLoverus2001: Once again, Vaughn WILL kick Kevin's butt...but not this next chapter. Within the next two chapters perhaps? It will happen, I assure you.
TimeIsOnYourSide: If this reminded you of your Homecoming, then wouldn't it have been a little bit depressing? I hope not! Yay! I'm glad that you're loving all the songs I put into this fic. Of course Vaughn and Syd kissed. This was THEIR chapter! Lol. YAy! You didn't think it was corny, but cliche, yes. Lol. I loved it when in your fic when S/V go together! That was so sweet! They are perfect for each other, I must say.
largemarge416: me=cornball. As long as you thought it was a sweet moment, I'm all good. It was hard trying to find a song to be Syd and Vaughn's song. But I decided that it was the first song that they had ever danced to together. So yeah. The meaning for what Vaughn said...it was more of a reading between the lines thing. Thank you SOOOOOO much for reviewing!
Total Vartan Lover: It's okay that you haven't been able to read my fic. I've been really busy myself, and I regret to inform you that I am unable to update until tomorrow or Tuesday night. I'm not going to end this too soon. But it will be kinda angsty!
noggi: I HATE IT WHEN THE SYSTEM IS DOWN! I couldn't review for beans on ANYTHING! Well its good that you know that I would never leave out a review for a response on purpose. I felt sooooo bad. Kevin isn't quite gone...yet. I want Syd's dress so bad! I find kissing parts kinda awkward to write. I dunno what makes it that way, its just awkward.
Ren201: I assure you, EVERYONE hates Kevin by this point of the story. Oh, and remember, Kevin is moving to Sacramento, so he won't be around much longer...Thanks for the review.
Hey everyone! You have no idea how much your reviews and feedback mean to me! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! You guys rock! But sadly, I won't be able to update tonight. But I'm hoping to update either tomorrow night, or Tuesday night.
~aryn
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[24 Apr 2005|12:33pm] |
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Okay. So here is a link to the blurprint for Syd's apartment, thanks to Mizzle fo' Rizzle
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y111/missmyst/SydsApartment.jpg
I hope this actually works!
I'm going to post review responses tonight.
But I sadly won't be able to update any fanfics. I've been working on this stupid country project thing, and it's really taking a lot of my time. But it's not due until Thursday, but I want to make sure I reserve plenty of time for fanfiction and Alias this week (and my birthday *coughWednesdaycough*). Unless you all want crap chapters...
I'll post review responses later tonight!
~aryn
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